Jae's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mrs Fatt]

Good!

I thought it was pretty funny but your jokes could use a little more developing. Overall it was a nice animation but just speculate things more so your comedy progresses. I thought the animation was above average but you need to develop that more too. It was smooth but the movements need to feel more natural. Also... shouldn't she be running after the bike? In the origonal game the reason youre chasing a black guy on a bike is to train. Just biking around really doesnt make sense for training. The joke could have been way more successful and that's what killed that particular joke for me. It didnt take that much away from your animation but i wanted to point out that a joke that could have been really funny was ruined because of lack of speculation. I recommend keeping a notepad with you at all times to record potential funny things and ruling out all the bad ones. If you have a book full of crap I'm sure you can find at least one good joke, you know? I'm not suggesting that you aren't funny because this animation was very humerous and well done. Everyone can improve. Good work!

EdpR responds:

Actually that was gonna be the joke, but for some reason I changed it, and I kinda regret that :/
you're absolutely right...
Thanks for the suggestions and the review, I'm gonna follow your advice :)

[demoreel V2: Sand edition]

Great reel!!

Tons of really fluid nice animation. good job!

[an292]

Good movie!

I loved the colors. The way they all played off of eachother was awesome. Try some more frame by frame. There were some nice loops in there but also try to be more organic, too! I liked it. 5

Rutger responds:

Thanks man! Yeah, I'm probably gonna do some more fbf soon.

[Lazyfeet Demo Reel]

You remind me of LazyMuffin

I liked the animations. I recommend transitioning some dynamic poses, now. This was enjoyable to watch.

Lazyfeet responds:

Oh Jae <3

Hey, and I'll give the transitioning ago. I think your right. My characters aren't fluid enough with movement. They seem to always be in a generic standing position.

;) tah

[Snowy Night]

Nice run cycle...

It has some nice moods in it but there isn't much else to say. The run cycle was good but it was a little jerky still and the pelvis rose too much without a very long transition between steps. I wish you had animated beyond this... what... 20 second clip? It's not bad but it's not good enough to go anywhere if it's this short.

[Confuzzled Ep. 1]

It looks nice.

You need to export this flash again at 48 kb/s - 128 kb/s. experiment with the export settings. Change all MP3s into wavs. It wasn't bad but the timing really took away from the animation.

CaptRandom89 responds:

Thanks, I'll remember to do those things later on^^

[Late for School]

I thought it was funny.

It got the point across in a somewhat predictable manner but I still laughed a little. It looks like you got lazy with the monster truck wheel. When he is reversing the wheel spins the wrong direction. It was good overall, though. Not great animation but a well put together short. Good work. Move on to something harder to animate.

Axeraider67 responds:

Ew, hard animation. Gross.

[Half Empty? or Half Full?]

Very serine.

Put me into a nice, mellow mood.

[Eres Veneno ++]

CONGRADULATION!

FIRST REVIEW, YUSSSSSSSSSSSS! haha

As always, Vinnie my friend, you've made something super stylish and awesome. I love you man and I'm really excited to get our battle started, man! I'm super stoked to see what people have to say about this animation you made, too! Good shit man. TOP 50!

-Jae

[S.I.N :: "Tortured Soul"]

I'm very disappointed.

It's so unfair to Production IG, whom you rotoscoped every action sequence from, that you didn't give a sliver of credit due to your submission. How dare you considor yourself an artist. You are an selfish bastard and I hope you come to realise this as you animate later in life.

Anyone who saw the Kill Bill II animation sequences, if you want to see the rotoscoped version, feel free to watch this increadably disgusting, undeserving, piece of shit copy animation broadcasted here. You should be ashamed of yourself, sir.